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My Destiny…


Can it be so? How would you know? Where could I possibly go?

Ghoulish questions float in plumes of liquid wax,
Burning through peace of mind they leave their tracks.
In and out of conscious thought I wander through,
While my undead phantoms cycle fro and to.

Must it be? Why can’t you see? What shall I choose, fight or flee?

Cry as I might for a moment of peace,
Cruel laughter will rise from the ghosts of unease.
A hand is offered, my mind may yet be free,
But find I may, its severed stump of mockery.

Is this a dream? What have I truly seen? Will nothing be as it may seem?

Here exhaustion finds a welcome place,
While the smile stays pasted ‘pon my face.
Fighting still I must for others’ sake,
A brilliant actress I would make…

Will this forever be my destiny…?
So my brain wouldn't let me work until I wrote something... It was at the point I began to speak only in rhyme, that I thought that poetry was greatly needed at this time... O.o
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:icongothic-kitten:
Wow, thats...i honestly don't know what to say other then it's amazing.
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Bonny0405 Jun 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OOOh ... dark

Very moving though.
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CelticMagician Jun 16, 2008   General Artist
XD And yet you're still peaking in rhymes! Good poem though! :3
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:icondragonic-saga:
How so? In rhyme I think I would not peak... however, a rhyme is very common when I speak... XD
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